Saturday, 17 May 2014

Bruised Petals..


The blow resounded hard in her head, bruising her pale skin and drawing blood as the man above her pounded on with ruthless ferocity, staining the once white sheets red. His hand smothered her cries and silent tears rolled down her cheeks as he exploited her innocence with viciousness, deflowering her delicate petals like an animal. He screamed as he reached the pinnacle, his hands forcing her head down into the mattress and she shut her eyes against the vision of his ghastly scarred face distorted with passion.

He left the money on the bedside table, an inhuman grin filling his face as he looked at her terror stricken eyes now filled with dread and fear, her youthful skin darkened black at places where he had hit her and whispered softly in her ears...
‘I shall be back again, my love...’

Written as part of the Five Sentence Fiction prompt.
Word Prompt: Innocence


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27 comments:

  1. Anita Sabat18 May 2014 at 08:34

    Shocking & stirring, Anusree. Sad reality for many...

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  2. Midnight scribbles18 May 2014 at 15:46

    oh good lord :(

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  3. Anonymous18 May 2014 at 19:18

    Oh, no. This is a horrific piece, because it happens. Indeed a sad reality for too many.
    Here is my 5SF: http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2014/05/belles-box.html

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    1. Donna Burman18 May 2014 at 21:27

      True Ann.. Read your 5SF as well.. Lovely..

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  4. Someone is Special18 May 2014 at 22:59

    :( :( :(

    Someone is Special

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  5. Soumya19 May 2014 at 14:04

    Oh this hurts. Really sad, really sad. Ouch!

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    1. Donna Burman19 May 2014 at 14:51

      This is the unfortunate story of many.. A reality hard to acknowledge..

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  6. Saru Singhal19 May 2014 at 20:51

    It fills me with anger. I was watching 'Abduction of Eden' last week and all this makes me really sad.

    Powerful writing, I must say.

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    1. Donna Burman19 May 2014 at 23:16

      Fills me with anger too Saru.. And thanks... :)

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  7. Anonymous19 May 2014 at 21:07

    A powerful story, very nice!

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  8. Team BlogAdda20 May 2014 at 11:45

    This post has been selected for the Tangy Tuesday Picks this week. Thank You for an amazing post! Cheers! Keep Blogging :)

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  9. Saahi20 May 2014 at 14:47

    So much told in a few words, sharp writing..

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  10. Namrata21 May 2014 at 07:34

    I am speechless and hairs are on their toes with fear. Believe me! I have goose bumps everywhere.

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    1. Donna Burman21 May 2014 at 11:47

      It wasn't my intention to scare you. :P But yes, such abuse is still widely prevalent and we need to raise our voice against it. :)

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  11. Stephen24 May 2014 at 19:04

    inhuman grin...poetic even though thoroughly sad..

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  12. Megha Sarin4 June 2014 at 02:58

    Amazing post! Love the write up!


    love
    http://www.meghasarin.com

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  13. Ankita 20 June 2014 at 00:05

    the description is so chilling! a nice read that reflects reality of such animals who pollute our society and prey on innocence.

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    1. Donna Burman20 June 2014 at 11:38

      Thanks Ankita.. And welcome to my blog!! :)

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  14. Aathira24 June 2014 at 19:16

    This is heartbreaking :( Sadly, so many children are robbed of their innocence and childhood.

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    1. Donna Burman24 June 2014 at 23:11

      Indeed.. And welcome to my blog Aathira!! :D

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