Beyond Words.....: Mistress Of The Night..

Sunday 29 June 2014

Mistress Of The Night..

She lies cocooned in my embrace, her body aglow and flushed after our lovemaking, her hair a wonderful tangle of messy curls caressing her cheek. Her face dazzles with happiness and my heart is filled with love, overwhelming and overpowering in its intensity. The world and its problems seem a distant memory while I gaze for countless moments at her beautiful face, so peaceful in sleep and then get up to leave.

As I drive through the silent night back to my wife, I pat the divorce papers that sit heavy in my pocket knowing in my heart that today I must end this farce for both our sakes. But as Sudha opens the door my courage fails me while my heart quietly whispers, ‘Tomorrow, I shall tell her tomorrow...’

Written as part of the Five Sentence Fiction prompt.

Word Prompt: Dazzles

16 comments:

Cifar29 June 2014 at 12:44
he will keep on cheating her wife as tomorrow never comes

My Five Sentence Fiction: The Lone Survivor
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mysundrynotes29 June 2014 at 13:35
one day his "tomorrow" would be too late and he'll stare at his pile of guilt helplessly !

a totally new take on prompt :) !
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Ram Bansal29 June 2014 at 18:22
He is not the MAN but a poor slave of his lust and conveniences.
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Soumyaa Verma29 June 2014 at 22:42
That's quite a fiction there. In mere 5 sentences you've manged to reveal so much about an unstable heart. I pity his wife
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Jithesh Prabhakaran30 June 2014 at 06:38
Nice...very nice!
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Soumya30 June 2014 at 15:44
I had written a similar post sometime back with the same title! :)
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Tina Basu30 June 2014 at 18:32
Nicely put, but not a man worth any praise.
Tina from The Sunny Side of Life
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Tomichan Matheikal30 June 2014 at 18:55
Some relationships are like this: unable to end, pointless to go on!
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